Here's a written and thumbnail summery of the whole thing
There’s a star near the end where I think I want to change something. Instead of what I’ve got I think I want the girl to come down and try to open the door with no success, and then they break it down together.
Also, here's a animatic gif thing of some old thumbnails of the scene with the records. I kind of like some of the stuff I had going, but I'm not sure what parts are worth keeping and what should be changed.