These are pretty cool! I'm a little confused at panel 5- did the door open? is the air coming in or out? I know those are hard things to communicate, sorry!
I like that you're using directional arrows to indicate camera movement, and nice shot variation in your sketches (medium shots/ closeups of the hand etc). I'm excited to see where this goes!
These are pretty cool! I'm a little confused at panel 5- did the door open? is the air coming in or out? I know those are hard things to communicate, sorry!
ReplyDeleteI like that you're using directional arrows to indicate camera movement, and nice shot variation in your sketches (medium shots/ closeups of the hand etc). I'm excited to see where this goes!
-Sarah Cotton