tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3465462938628082149.post1568274937109131401..comments2015-02-04T17:35:14.887-08:00Comments on BYU 2015 Winter: Sequential Narrative Illustration: Sarah T Plant life pgs 1&2Justinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14095292097119896225noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3465462938628082149.post-3113411727031070532015-02-04T17:35:14.887-08:002015-02-04T17:35:14.887-08:00These are pretty cool! I'm a little confused a...These are pretty cool! I'm a little confused at panel 5- did the door open? is the air coming in or out? I know those are hard things to communicate, sorry!<br /><br /> I like that you're using directional arrows to indicate camera movement, and nice shot variation in your sketches (medium shots/ closeups of the hand etc). I'm excited to see where this goes!<br /><br />-Sarah CottonSae Cottonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12634647640007317730noreply@blogger.com