Good facial expressions and staging so far. A few of the frames are a little less clear than others, but a good variety of close-up and medium shots. See if you can exaggerate the lines of action even more. Also I wonder if there's a way to make the main character even more distinct visually from the others. He's smaller and has a little bit of hair at the back of this helmet, which helps. But maybe if the others all had beards and he was the only one who doesn't… or if his helmet was a less-fancy design than the others—some kind of "noob" helmet. I don't know—just brainstorming out loud a bit.
You've really got me wondering what happens!
ReplyDeleteGood facial expressions and staging so far. A few of the frames are a little less clear than others, but a good variety of close-up and medium shots. See if you can exaggerate the lines of action even more. Also I wonder if there's a way to make the main character even more distinct visually from the others. He's smaller and has a little bit of hair at the back of this helmet, which helps. But maybe if the others all had beards and he was the only one who doesn't… or if his helmet was a less-fancy design than the others—some kind of "noob" helmet. I don't know—just brainstorming out loud a bit.
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